Showing posts with label Evaluation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Evaluation. Show all posts
Wednesday, 8 March 2017
Tuesday, 7 March 2017
Sunday, 22 January 2017
Peer Assessment
Group Sequence: Panophobia
What elements of this sequence did you feel were successful? give at least 2 elements, and explain why they were successful.
What elements of this sequence did you feel were successful? give at least 2 elements, and explain why they were successful.
I think that the most successful parts of this film opening were the titles and the shots of the flashbacks. From the titles you can see that this took time and planning and that a lot thought went into it but then also you can see that this then had to be edited so that the timings were right and not off which also would've taken a lot of time so that the titles were perfect. Also the flash backs were really well done, they really helped build on the story and helped create a bigger picture to the audience of what was actually going on
Were there any aspects of the sequence which you felt were confusing/distracting/missing, etc? Be sure to explain your answers.
The only thing I did find a bit confusing would be the long blank screens towards the end as it was hard to tell if the opening was over or not and overall that just made me confused as I wasn't sure on when to start thinking more about the opening and instead I was shocked when It carried on.
List 2 things which you feel would have improved this sequence and explain your opinion.
One way to improve could be to change the long black screens at the end so that people don't get confused and also another improvement could be to maybe make sure that when your filming that all the shots you get are clear as some of the titles were hard to see sometimes.
Friday, 20 January 2017
Thursday, 8 December 2016
First Draft Film Opening Feedback
When I looked through the feedback that we got from are film opening some of the same comment seemed to appear such as most people seemed to like the fact the we used dogs and so we decided that we didn't need to make any changes to that as it was overall positive on the scenes with the dogs in them. Another comment that I saw was common was about the voice over and how the person that did it stuttered at some points of it and that we should redo it so it sounds more realistic, after seeing this comments we saw that we needed to do it again and so the next day we went and re did it with someone else who could do it more clearly and so it was more understandable. A comment that we got back that was another positive was that we used different angles which set the scene more and made it more interesting.
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